Mera Bharat Mahan
I wrote a poem titled Mera Bharat Mahaan sometime in middle school, and remember submitting it for the school annual magazine. The class teacher pretty much rubbished me, implying that there was no way i had written the poem myself. (It was that good, apparently!)
I don’t recall the exact poem myself, but here’s a similar version. The poem is in Hindi, so apologies to readers who don’t understand the language.
Translating into English would not recreate the magic, so not doing that for now. If you would like a translated version, drop me a comment.
Here we go - Mera Bharat Mahaan
Hamari sabhyata ka sab karte bakhaan
Duniya bhar mein hai iska gungaan
Ye desh jo hai hum sab ki shaan
Mera Bharat MahaanNeta hamare sabse balwaan
Kabhi nahi rukte unke koi kaam
Life mein unko hai poora aaraam
Mera Bharat MahaanAam aadmi ki zindagi sasti
Rookhi sookhi si iski basti
Karna padta ise pet ke liye kaam
Mera Bharat MahaanGandhi ne diya hamen ahinsa ka paath
Humne kaat diye ek doosre ke haath
Bapu ka bas rah gaya naam
Mera Bharat MahaanPadosi mulkon se lagatar ghamasan
Dharm ke naam pe marta insaan
Neta hamare ban gaye haiwan
Mera Bharat MahaanHindi Cheeni Bhai Bhai
China ne fir missile chalayi
Shanti ka de diya pramaan
Mera Bharat Kitna MahaanSoftware mein kari tarakki
Pokhran mein dikhayi shakti
Uda diya humne Chandrayaan
Mera Bharat MahaanNaye yug mein jagrati aayi
Bhartiyon mein rashtriyata samaayi
Desh ka badhne laga sammaan
Mera Bharat really Mahaan
Very nice and very apt… no wonder your teacher did not believe you..this is excellent !!
Very nice dude ;)
thx
:)
so at last u did manage to get ur poem published.congrats.Well done,keep it up.
Bahut Badhiya!!
nice
Very nice. But are you saying that our leaders are wrestlers (Balwaan) !!!
Mera Bharat Mahaan…
Mera Bharat Mahaan! Tribute to our great nation….
Lol, I can imagine you as kiddo writing this so enthusiastically … How old r u by the way??? Lol.. :)
@Vijay, @Me Singh, @Lata and @Reema - Thanks for the appreciation
@Dinesh - Thanks. Balwaan just means powerful, but sure, politics in India is much like a wrestling game.
@Oxy - Welcome to Amreekandesi!
How old am i? Here’s two clues:
1. If Ramalinga Raju is convicted and gets to spend a decade in jail, then when he comes out he will be twice as old as me one year less than half that time from now.
2. Seven years ago my age was equal to the number of months emergency lasted in India, circa Indira Gandhi.
you need to sue isro for copyright violation on chandrayaan. would’ve worked wonders in the land of the (atlanta) braves.
- s.b.
p.s.: i wonder if that is why oxy was asking your age :-). how old is raju now? ;-)
hey! i like that feature giving me 10 minutes to take back any weird comments i made…
- s.b.
Whoa! I’m not surprised the teacher didn’t believe you. I still didnt understand some words! I think I’m starting to believe that writing poetry in hindi is quite a talent, one that i clearly don’t possess! Great stuff :D
yes i support to u
Nicely done. I can understand why the teachers wouldnt believe… :). Now that last stanza, I want that for a reality… but first we need to really look at what all the development means to a common man and also learn more about Atma-samaan and swa-abhiman before others give us Samaan..
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@somebody - Welcome to Amreekandesi! Well, i did not write this exact same poem 15 years back. I wrote it this week, so ISRO has no reason to fear me!
And yes, that is a cool feature i added some time back…comes in handy in case you want to correct some typos or html errors, or just change the comment!
@Shivya - Thanks for the appreciation!
@Mysoul - Thanks. I too am hoping to see a growing sense of nationalism. Only when we respect ourselves can we expect the world to take us seriously.
awesome..even i don’t think you have written it yourself!!!!
You can’t blame the teacher, the poem is too good to be written by someone in middle school.
//Hindi Cheeni Bhai Bhai
China ne fir missile chalayi
:lol:
Bahut Badhiya!!!
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Doha: Jay netaa gan raj niti ke
Tumko karoo pranaam
Tumhi vidhataa anyayee ke
Karo chaapluso kaam
Chaupayee: Jay atyachaar ke netaa gan
Tum mohe ho sab ke man
Sab chamacho ki karo bhalayee
We chaahe jitani kare buarayee
Unhe aanch na aane paaye
Tumhari kurshi bhale hijaaye
Bhrathachaar me tum aage ho
Awgun kari ke dhaage ho
Ghapla jhagra tum karwaate
Sahi jano ko yoo marwaate
Rajniti ke bane pujari
Tum toshi ki karo rakhwari
Jurm karwaane me mahir ho
Chor uchakkoo me shamil ho
Dhanya-dhanya bharat ke veer
Bholi janata pe maro teer
Kya kurshi ka khail nirala
Hardam odhe raho dushala
Paiso ki tumako bhookh lagee hai
Baimani ki peer jagi hai
Kab tak aise chalegaa kaam
Ek din hogaa satyanash
Tab hath jor kar nahi bacho ge
Sab dekhe ge tum jald pisoge
Doha: Bhagwan aisi bya chala do
Atyachaar ho jaaye kam
Rajniti ke baimano ka
Fir bharat me ho na janm
wow so nice and brilliant poem it should be published too!!!!!!!!
Dear sir
I am trying to get some poems (original ) for submission in orkut for a dear frieinds rememberance day …..would you be kind enough to provide me with the english translation for this ….i couldnt understand much …but i loooved what i did understand …please
thank you x
100 me 99.99 beimaan…. fir bhi mera bharat mahan
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really really nice!!i wish even i could write such realistic poems
really rally nice!!!* wish even i could write such realistic poems like u.
Hey Amreekandesi
Nice one. Just stumbled upon your blog and liked it. Keep up the good work.
Cheers!
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not bad
Excuse me.. apka name kya hai.. mai is poem ko apni speech me bolna chahti hun lekin humari teacher kehti hai ki kisiki poem nahi churani chahiye aur gar likhen to usse puch ke
kallu pagla aadmi….nahi nahi aaaurat haiii